Reflect: I related to your story very well. I myself am working very hard to help out my family as well. I also jumped from job to job because I felt like it wasn’t good enough or it just got old to me or unfair. I definitely understand, going into this field as well. You have a lot of options as a student going into media communications.
Inquire: When you said you had moved a couple of times to restart your life, what were you trying to communicate with your audience? What was the message in that statement? How did the picture you provide show what you were trying to portray?
Suggest: You might want to consider being more specific with your pictures. after speaking over an image into another part of your life can distract your viewer. You might want to continue engaging the eye as you do with the ears when the viewer is listening to your voice. Always keep in mind some viewers are better with their visuals than listening.
Elevate: Continue to express yourself with your words. It sounds great and you really tell a story. But now, its time to expand on your visuals. I suggest adding in more pictures. Pictures that are more specific and detailed into what you’re saying and feeling. Not just plain images, images that without much words can capture what you are trying to say.
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